heartbeat

Saturday, December 10, 2016

have you ever heard
a heart beat
stop
have you ever been in a room
when someone
takes their last
breath
have you ever heard
the sound of a infant
still in the mothers womb
the pounding
of life
it echoes of joy
these sounds
they go hand in hand
life and death
death and life
both are beginnings
just of different paths

i'll never forget the sound of life 
nor of death 

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  1. Wow. *is speechless* This is so beautiful.

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    1. *doesn't know what to say* seriously...*hugs you*

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  2. beautiful poem girl! <3 you and words #unstoppable

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  3. w o w.

    oh goodness. i can't even say anything. wow. ooh wow.

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    1. *doesn't know what to say either*

      *silently cries* you're awesome okay

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  4. as always, your words are so incredible i can't find any of my own to describe them. <3

    evelyn | epilogue

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    1. wow...*feels like sobbing* *gives you a hug* seriously, thank you

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  5. Wow! This is so powerful.
    (You posted "the picture")😂😂😂

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    1. *squeals*
      *laughs* I thought it went well with my emotions ;)

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  6. Um... dont mine me *heart silently rips into shreds*

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    1. IDK I PROMISE I HONESTLY DONT EVEN THINK I AM blah

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  8. I just totally teared up. Reminded me about my grandpa.
    Thanks for sharing! You write so beautifully!!!

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    1. ohmyword.... *hugs you* i know..
      thanks girl <3333

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  9. Whoa those last few lines. How do you do that Julia??

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    1. basically idk it was just something I was thinking about? lol

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  10. OH MY STARS. Just...howwwww?! You are brilliant and amazing and what else is there to say?

    Loooove this. <3

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    1. everyone asks me this question and all I can say is

      maybe its what i eat before i go to bed?????

      SERIOUSLY THO *hugs you* <3333 thanks girl

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  11. WHY HAVEN'T I COMMENTED ON THIS ALREADY?!

    This is fab, Julia. Like beautiful. Probably one of my favorites of your poems!! <333

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    1. I DONT KNOW XD XD

      eeep thanks...*sobs* truly?! same <3 (which probably sounds prideful..but..yeah lol)

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dude you make my day with comments *wipes tear dramatically* *gives you a hug*

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