to be held

Wednesday, September 28, 2016

i want to let go
but i can't seem to
the hold on me is too great
the battle is larger than i can fight
my fists are ready
im unprepared to fight
but im ready to try
lashes come from each corner
it becomes useless to move anymore
all i can do is let go
my fists relax
they seem to melt
back into hands which now can be
by a large
and loving


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    1. oh my word, girl!! I JUST POSTED THIS! xD Hahaa thanks <333

  2. Wow, this is so true and so beautiful!! This reminded me of "Just be Held" by Casting Crowns. One of my favorite songs ever!

    1. Oh wow, I forgot about that's so good <333

    2. I STARTED HUMMING THAT SONG AS SOON AS I SAW THE TITLE. I was scrolling thorough the comments wondering if I should mention it, and, voila! Someone already had :D!

  3. gorgeous <3 i especially love the last few lines - they really stick with you after the poem is over.

    evelyn clickman @ if these stars shall fall

    1. aww thank you girl you make me so special <333

  4. k girl i know this. because it's that war that you want to win but then He's LIKE I GOT THIS and just agwjagy. i know i know. xx

  5. hahaa so funny cuz I just realized that I literally just kinda wrrrootte this poem..and then posted it. I don't THINK it has any deep meaning for me lol but maybe it does and I just don't know it??? hahaaa #imweird


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