but i can't seem to
the hold on me is too great
the battle is larger than i can fight
my fists are ready
im unprepared to fight
but im ready to try
lashes come from each corner
it becomes useless to move anymore
all i can do is let go
my fists relax
they seem to melt
back into hands which now can be
held
by a large
and loving
Hand
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ReplyDeleteoh my word, girl!! I JUST POSTED THIS! xD Hahaa thanks <333
DeleteWow, this is so true and so beautiful!! This reminded me of "Just be Held" by Casting Crowns. One of my favorite songs ever!
ReplyDeleteOh wow, I forgot about that song...it's so good <333
DeleteI STARTED HUMMING THAT SONG AS SOON AS I SAW THE TITLE. I was scrolling thorough the comments wondering if I should mention it, and, voila! Someone already had :D!
Deletehahaa you did?!? how funny!
DeleteI love this so much okay <3
ReplyDeleteoh my gosh thank you okay <3
Deletegorgeous <3 i especially love the last few lines - they really stick with you after the poem is over.
ReplyDeleteevelyn clickman @ if these stars shall fall
aww thank you girl you make me so special <333
Deletek girl i know this. because it's that war that you want to win but then He's LIKE I GOT THIS and just agwjagy. i know i know. xx
ReplyDeletehahaa so funny cuz I just realized that I literally just kinda wrrrootte this poem..and then posted it. I don't THINK it has any deep meaning for me lol but maybe it does and I just don't know it??? hahaaa #imweird
ReplyDeleteMmm. Okay, I needed this. <3
ReplyDeleteacckkkk wow...<3333333
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