to dance
Friday, September 16, 2016
i was walking
he was walking
we did the little dance
where you can't get around someone
so you dance
we laughed
i went home
he went home
years went by
i graduated
he graduated
i got a job caring for the elderly
the old man there told me of his grandson
and how he always would come
and bring him stories
which he had written
just for him
i kept working
he went to college
for literature and writing
when asked what inspired him to write
he would shrug
and say his grandpops
who would tell him stories when he was young
the stories stuck
the memories did too
so he had to write them
people would smile
i continued working
he continued studying
one day
i was walking down the hall
and he was walking
we did the little dance
i remembered
he remembered
"come in grandson, i want you to meet my favorite nurse."
we both locked eyes
our paths had crossed again
and at our wedding
we danced
all night long
under the stars
just him and me
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JULIA! This is so perfect. Like a story in a poem and GAH I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU DO IT!
ReplyDeleteEMILY OH MY GOSH like thaannkkk you!! <333333333 EEP! These two people came out of nowhere.. I was just like "hey!" hahaa
DeleteAWWW SO CUTE. <3333 It would seriously be adorable and so cool if this happened in real life!!! IT IS A WONDERFUL STORY.
ReplyDelete*HUGGGGGGGGGGSS* I totally agree...can you imagine it?! Gosh..I'm kinda thinking of writing a short story with the poem as the backbone now. You guys are all so sweet!
Delete*HUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGSSSSS* (Battle of the longest hug, lol.) YES. I can SO imagine it. JULIA, prime plotting material. WRITE THAT SHORT STORY, OKAY?!?!?
DeleteACCCKK I think I will!!!
DeleteAAHHHH! SO STINKING SAPPY! I love this! It's really, really sappy, my favorite! :P
ReplyDeleteWith love and all joy,
Allie D.
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ITS YOUR FAVORITE?!?!? Oh gosh I'm so proud!!!
DeleteThat was so sweet. xx
ReplyDeleteAwww thanks Jessica! <3333
DeleteHmmmmmm.......
ReplyDeleteXD
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm???
DeleteXD
Awwww...<3
ReplyDeleteP.S. you could totally write a short story about this.
you think so??!? I'm so inspired...brb! gotta go write xD
DeleteI LOVED THIS ONE SO FRIGGIN MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3
ReplyDeleteTHANKS GIRL!!!!
DeleteThis is TOO cute! Like... hsdfjkhasd, I want this to have been a real thing so much XD. Love. Just. Love. This needs to be the unsuspected plot line of a movie with an awe-filling soundtrack and a shy, sweet, brown haired girl dressed in a green sweater (you really got my mind seeing images with this one... haha!). Like, ya know, you think that the movie is going to be about something else (like the girl jumping through all kind of obstacles to carry out her life dream to help others (because of something that happened in her past?) and the grandpa/his grandson's writings give her encouragement?), and it is about that, too... but the REAL story that leaves people like me with this happy-heartbroken ache inside is this "side plot" (that, of course, would all come together in the last fifteen minutes, because that's how movies with this kind of beauty always torture us)!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd yeah. This really thrilled me. Sorry.
Thank you.
OH WOW. well do you mind if I steal some of this for the short story that I'm going to write about these two delightful people?? I saw her as a brunette as well!!! EEP! I can't believe I gave you such a thrill...gosh <3333
ReplyDeleteYOU WOULD USE SOME OF MY IDEAS FOR HER STORY?!!?! What do you MEAN would I mind?!!?!?! That would be like the coolest, best thing ever!!!! (As long as I get to see it when it's done :D!!!)
DeleteYes!! I would use some of it! eep! thanks <333 oh of cooourse. I think it will be posted on here xD
DeleteI'll be waiting eagerly :)!
DeleteOh, I love this sososo much! It's so beautiful and yes, you need to write a short story! Sooo pretty! <3
ReplyDeleteohhhh I'm so glad!!! Guess I had better get working on that xD EEEP thanks <333
DeleteOH MY GOSH.
ReplyDeletePLEASE MAKE THIS A SHORT STORY.
This is definitely my favorite thing that you've written.
AAARRRGH!! IM SO SO SO SORRY IMMA GONNA WORK ON IT I PROMISE
Deleteoh my gosh so much pressure what if the short story stinks?!?!?!
*literally got tingles*
ReplyDelete*realizes I'm super late for commenting* *doesn't care*
THE TINGLES EEEEEEEEP
Delete*doesn't care either* *is trying to write story*
UMMMMMM
ReplyDeleteEXCUSE ME WHILE I GO CRY MY EYES OUT
THIS IS AFHLAKSJD;AJSKJD BEAUTIFUL
OMW *cries with you cuz wowowowowoowoowwwwow*
DeleteHOW HAVE I NOT READ THIS BEFORE????
ReplyDeleteSo much prettiness
I'm in love <3
IDK?!?!?!?!?!??!
Delete*squeals*