frightened

Saturday, March 18, 2017


there's a place
that i won't enter
a room 
that i haven't seen for a long 
long time
you see if i enter the walls
i'll be forced 
forced to remember 
forced to forget 
and im not sure 
if im ready for that yet 

you can't edit feelings 
they're there
loud and sometimes 
not
it's assumed easier
to just forget them
but you see 
its not 

i. will. not. forget.

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  1. Wow.<3
    What inspired this one?

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  2. "you can't edit feelings" but man, I wish I could.

    great poem; for some reason it seems like it could be the first few lines of a dystopian/sci-fi novel (sorry I'm a dystopia/sci-fi lover so I can connect almost anything to that genre xD)

    O | Life as a Young Lady

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    1. ikr...like wow wouldn't that be helpful and scary?

      thanks <3 aww woah really? that's cool tho!! hmm... now you've got some wheels turning here lol

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  3. This poem makes you sound like a refugee or something. XD
    Love this! Your so good at capturing feelings into words! Amazing! <3<3<3

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    1. bro whhaaa? That's interesting!
      aw thanks *is crying* you're so awesome girl

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  4. Okay, so this is one of my FAVORITE Ju-poems *hugs the thing*. I LOVE IT SO MUCH, THANK YOU FOR SHARING <3 <3 <3 <3 <3. Like, it was so gorgeous and beautiful and real, but it also sounded like I could use it to create an amazing character AND I JUST CAN'T THINK OF WORDS RIGHT NOW. <3 <3

    Ahem. That is all, the end xD.

    ~ Savannah
    scattered-scribblings.blogspot.com

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    1. ackk but Savannah you say that like every time and every time I don't know what to say and I still don't so ackk *hugs you* THANKS SO MUCH XD

      ahem. I guess that's all for me as well ;)

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  5. i know this feeling all to well because yes it hurts to remember. remembering the good means remembering the pain, and it hurts so much but yet it's so worth it, because forgetting means loosing those memories, and they don't deserve that.

    this is so good and too real.

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    1. wow. I think you know me better than I know me cuz I was reading this and nodding cuz woah yes yes yes yes yes

      bro you're good

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dude you make my day with comments *wipes tear dramatically* *gives you a hug*

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