where is the beauty

Tuesday, March 28, 2017



i went to a place
its called a home
but is it really?
the hallway was full of people
and horrible country albums were playing
WHY ISNT THERE CLASSICAL MUSIC PLAYING
i wanted to shout

how are you feeling
i said instead

WHERE IS THE BEAUTY 
i screamed in agony


the people 
they try to smile
but they're waiting
THEY'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SO LONG
i painfully held back my words

hello
i said
i'm 57
she said
no. no she's not

SHE WAS ONCE YOUNG LIKE ME
i teared up

pain and sorrow
are part of life
yes
but truly
can't we just try
to fight that part
and be the love everyone
desires to have
THEY JUST NEED A SMILE AND LOVE
i cry bc its so much harder than it seems

don't forget the elderly. you will be that one day 

8 comments

  1. You posted it!!! So moving Julia❤️❤️❤️❤️ Keep writing amazing/inspiring poems!

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  2. awww this is so so beautiful and also so so true omw

    took me a couple readings but omwomw

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    1. awwwwww wow thanks

      and ikr i felt it was kinda confusing
      but i had to post it

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  3. OMG THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!! <3 It's strange, and a little confusing, but that's what makes it so amazing! I LOVE IT.

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    1. OH GOSH and yes that's what's everyone is saying. I've reread it so many times and I still don't know what I could to change it - so I left it lol EEP THANKS

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  4. wow wow wow i love this

    you're amazing

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    1. wow wow wow i love you

      no, you're amazing *hugs*

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dude you make my day with comments *wipes tear dramatically* *gives you a hug*

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