i went to a place
its called a home
but is it really?
the hallway was full of people
and horrible country albums were playing
WHY ISNT THERE CLASSICAL MUSIC PLAYING
i wanted to shout
how are you feeling
i said instead
WHERE IS THE BEAUTY
i screamed in agony
the people
they try to smile
but they're waiting
THEY'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SO LONG
i painfully held back my words
hello
i said
i'm 57
she said
no. no she's not
SHE WAS ONCE YOUNG LIKE ME
i teared up
pain and sorrow
are part of life
yes
but truly
can't we just try
to fight that part
and be the love everyone
desires to have
are part of life
yes
but truly
can't we just try
to fight that part
and be the love everyone
desires to have
THEY JUST NEED A SMILE AND LOVE
i cry bc its so much harder than it seems
don't forget the elderly. you will be that one day
You posted it!!! So moving Julia❤️❤️❤️❤️ Keep writing amazing/inspiring poems!
ReplyDeleteI did!! awww thanks girl <3
Deleteawww this is so so beautiful and also so so true omw
ReplyDeletetook me a couple readings but omwomw
awwwwww wow thanks
Deleteand ikr i felt it was kinda confusing
but i had to post it
OMG THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!! <3 It's strange, and a little confusing, but that's what makes it so amazing! I LOVE IT.
ReplyDeleteOH GOSH and yes that's what's everyone is saying. I've reread it so many times and I still don't know what I could to change it - so I left it lol EEP THANKS
Deletewow wow wow i love this
ReplyDeleteyou're amazing
wow wow wow i love you
Deleteno, you're amazing *hugs*