a heart beat
stop
have you ever been in a room
when someone
takes their last
breath
have you ever heard
the sound of a infant
still in the mothers womb
the pounding
of life
it echoes of joy
these sounds
they go hand in hand
life and death
death and life
both are beginnings
just of different paths
i'll never forget the sound of life
nor of death
Wow. *is speechless* This is so beautiful.
ReplyDelete*doesn't know what to say* seriously...*hugs you*
Deletebeautiful poem girl! <3 you and words #unstoppable
ReplyDeletegeesshhh thanks <333333 #ditto
Deletew o w.
ReplyDeleteoh goodness. i can't even say anything. wow. ooh wow.
*doesn't know what to say either*
Delete*silently cries* you're awesome okay
as always, your words are so incredible i can't find any of my own to describe them. <3
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wow...*feels like sobbing* *gives you a hug* seriously, thank you
DeleteWow! This is so powerful.
ReplyDelete(You posted "the picture")😂😂😂
*squeals*
Delete*laughs* I thought it went well with my emotions ;)
Um... dont mine me *heart silently rips into shreds*
ReplyDelete*blinks* omw
DeleteAlso HOW ARE YOU SO FABULOUS??
ReplyDeleteIDK I PROMISE I HONESTLY DONT EVEN THINK I AM blah
DeleteI just totally teared up. Reminded me about my grandpa.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing! You write so beautifully!!!
ohmyword.... *hugs you* i know..
Deletethanks girl <3333
Whoa those last few lines. How do you do that Julia??
ReplyDeletebasically idk it was just something I was thinking about? lol
DeleteBeautiful... :,)
ReplyDelete*squeals* thank you!! <333
DeleteOH MY STARS. Just...howwwww?! You are brilliant and amazing and what else is there to say?
ReplyDeleteLoooove this. <3
everyone asks me this question and all I can say is
Deletemaybe its what i eat before i go to bed?????
SERIOUSLY THO *hugs you* <3333 thanks girl
WHY HAVEN'T I COMMENTED ON THIS ALREADY?!
ReplyDeleteThis is fab, Julia. Like beautiful. Probably one of my favorites of your poems!! <333
I DONT KNOW XD XD
Deleteeeep thanks...*sobs* truly?! same <3 (which probably sounds prideful..but..yeah lol)