you're dealing with it
the pain
the dejection
the daily grim
i can see that
i can see your struggle
it's too much to carry
you mumble over and over again
that you can do it
but what if
now hear me out
what if
you can't
don't know where that came from - maybe one of you needed it??
*shivers* Yeah I actually shivered reading this...just...wow.
ReplyDeleteno.
ReplyDeleteway.
omw.
Wow um did you just read my inner thoughts because this is me in a poem.
ReplyDeleteYour way too real and wonderful and gahhh this was too good
*nods* totally did Elizabeth
Deletewow..really? IM GLAD THATS A GOOD THING cuz my next poem? *cringes* I'm scared to post it...
girl you speak to me.....sigh How do you know me so well??
ReplyDeletemaybe cuz we are twins and have similar feelings???...
DeleteYeah, it may have freaked me out a bit when I first read some of this.
ReplyDeleteBecause I'm the one who mumbles.
Who is worrying about making it through.
omw *hugs you* sorry...didn't mean to freak you out :P just me writing feelings lol
DeleteOh don't worry. I like how you write, it just was like "wait..." when I saw that part. XP
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